支招小作文(167)I靜態柱圖英國藝術&物理專業畢業生去向

December 7, 2023雅思小作文系列 | 欄目推送說明分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對，最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。[2023/ 12/ 2] The chart below shows the destinations of students graduating from Physics and Art in the UK in 2007.【主體段分段】：按照圖分段Body 1：employment + working and studyingBody 2：其余三個類別【開頭段】The bar chart compares the choices of graduates from Arts and Physics in Britain for the year 2007.【概述段】Overall, students majoring in physics outnumbered those from art among all the given destinations. The largest gap between these two groups of graduates could be found in employment.思路要點：- 所有選擇中都是physics>art- Employment中art和physics的差距最大【Body 1】Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatemployment was the most favorable option for graduates — 35% of the physics majors and 25% of the students who majored in art decided to seek employment.By contrast, for both majors, only less than 10% of the students chose to work and study, making this choice the least attractive one.思路要點：- 選擇employment的人數最多（physics有35%，Art有25%）- 兩個專業畢業生中選擇work and study的人數最少，<10%【Body 2】We can also see thatcontinuous study and training was chosen by 20% of students who studied physics and 15% of those from art.A similar difference could be foundin unemployment, where the proportion of physics graduates(15%)slightly outnumberedstudents with a degree in art.However,roughly the same percentages ofstudents from both majors made other decisions, with the figure of roughly 8%.思路要點：- further training and study：physics--20%，art--15%- unemployment有類似的差距- others：art和physics數據相似--大約8%